Glossing Blog...

The main themes that recur through my paper are my self interest to discover the qualities of water. I continually give my personal insight as to which things will work and which will not. I am surprised that I stayed on topic and did not draw off. In the "water" technology world today there are so many different types that are around, so it’s easy to get off topic and being talking about something else regarding water, but not regarding my actual question/topic. I feel the themes I have are developed enough but might need to explain the scientific terms a little more; therefore it’s not as confusing. All of the themes seem to fit right into my draft and tend to stay on topic very well. There is other connecting that I want to bring in to prove points on water as fuel/energy (other sources with good - positive examples). I begin my paper with an interesting thought to make the reader think. Then I give my personal insight as to what could be done. From there I continue to give the reader information about the topic, with examples, and my personal input throughout the draft (so in other words I go back and forth between personal and public information). I think the order of my information is correct, except I plan to add more examples to add value and I possibly could change the order of some things a little. There is no repetition in the paper and the only transition that needs to occur is the transition to hydrogen.

Hydro Part 2

Overall, I felt this was a difficult task. It takes a lot of time looking up and researching for a very specific topic. After doing a little research, I decided I had to narrow down my topic, and question a bit. I decided I want to change toward how water/hydrogen is and could be used as energy. I believe this is a more focused topic and will allow for a better research essay. With today’s technology always changing, water has become a source of future energy, powering things such as homes with electricity and hopefully one day cars. Water energy has many different ways of being put to use, and how the energy is received from the ocean and source is interesting. I felt the search engines help a little, but it’s hard to find subjects that are interesting enough to write about in comparison with my topic.

Water/Hyrdo

Topic: Water - I think water has become an important part of today's technology in many different ways. I plan to investigate further into the most important hydro/water technologies today, by explain their significance, how they help us, the economy, and the environment.
Question: How has water (H2O) become a significant feature in current technology?I believe this is a reasonable question because it allows my subject to be discussed in current and important technologies. Water is all around us and used by everyone every day, so it’s interesting to see how its latest technologies are being discovered and used today.
Rationale: Water is an interesting natural element that has been on our planet since day one, it is quite interesting to see how water has affected some of our most recent technologies. I hope to gain knowledge about the scientific uses of water and how they have been applied to today's technologies. I want to understand their advantages and better know how they could help our daily lives and the economy.